Talk:Department of Ica

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The English on this page is poor and I can't really understand it. The vocabularly is very impressive, however the syntax is awful. Much more simple language and vocabulary would be far more beneficial than the writer merely displaying the large size of their dictionary.

I am referring to the Geography section and the paragraph on the Nazca. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 87.194.198.253 (talk) 21:52, August 21, 2007 (UTC)